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RE: A Short Story for The Ink Well Prompt #53

in The Ink Well4 years ago

You see, these feelings seemed the same all the time. When she catches or eavesdrops and gets the conversation right, you may not have too many options convincing her.
I hear the readers hearts pumping in expectation of the life threatening response she will give.
It was a beautiful read if you asked me.

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Hello @mrenglish,
Your stories are full of emotion and wisdom. They always speak to me. I'm glad this story affected you.
Once we hear something, something horrible, what do we do? There it is. Sometimes we have to respond.
The circumstance described in the story is common. Children are innocent bystanders to adult drama. What can they do? Often they save up all those powerful emotions until adulthood. There the memories and hurts can do much harm.
Thank you so much for reading. I do appreciate your feedback.

Thank you, @agmoore for always bringing on such great vibes in your story. They are quite a reflection of society.

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