You wrote a story that I didn't understand if I was waiting for something scary or not. Every word I read thrilled me because I ready myself what will happen next. You created a scene which made me scared more. It's funny to think that what you hated was given to you.
I love horror movies or stories but I disliked that sound of creaking door and stairs. Still, I continued reading it because it pulled me to keep on.
You wrote well and makes me envy the way how you write.
Thank you very much for your feedback! I too hate creaking doors and I hate basements myself, or any dark rooms for that matter. Really happy you enjoyed it so much!