All I thought while writing this was a sad story. Of course, death would be the best for it. I wanted him to lie himself so the readers would not recognize it. To tell you the truth I had no idea how my story ended up this way. I just focused on plot but ignored the flow. But anyway I'm happy you like it. It's fine if you're too late to vote for it. You still gave me beautiful words and as a person hoping to be an author someday means so much.
Thank you