Thank you!
I believe it is underdeveloped. I wanted to expand the characters and the tale but that would take too many words and I'm lazy. :(
The traveler is supposed to be a worn-out tired nihilist and the forager is a cynic who's secretly an altruist. But rushing out all of it didn't really help the story one bit.
I think it would work great as a 100-page novella.
As a matter of fact, Id be the first guy to buy that novella!:3
Haha! Now that's some reassurance! 😄