Flower of Barnabas @ogochi
3 years ago in The Ink Well by ogochi (45)
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Wow, greed is really a terrible thing, people should learn to refrain from it.
This is a real drama. Temptation surely led Kane astray. Jessica also. You created a dynamic between the characters that in a longer story could have led to some interesting interactions. One of the mysteries you create begs an explanation: what is behind the mystery surrounding Gofun's kidnapping. Still, the resolution here is strong, as is your adaptation of the prompt.
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Money is a tremendous temptation that can crush a man's heart, as it did with Kane and Jessica.