It's always fun to write characters with distinct personalities and quirks, and it sounds like Sloni and Elin are quite a dynamic duo. It's great that you were able to convey Sloni's intoxicated state effectively through the use of scene breaks, as it can be difficult to capture that type of feeling in writing. It's important to have characters who balance each other out and provide an interesting contrast, so Elin's level-headedness is likely a great counterbalance to Sloni's wilder side.
It's great to hear that you enjoyed writing this story and that you're pleased with the positive feedback you received. It's common for writers to feel like their work is unfinished or could use some polishing, so don't worry about that feeling. It's always good to go back and edit your work to make it even better. Keep up the good work and keep writing!
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