An interesting story with an unexpected ending. The narration is vivid and the length and depth of the story could make it a short action thriller.
But the FBI part is too fast-paced, not bad though; and the girlfriend thing remains a mystery to me.
Yea, I also wanted to go in details with arrest scene but I was also trying to be careful not to go outside the no violence rule.
Thank you for reading through and the nice comments, it means a lot.