I really enjoyed this little tale. There were some slight errors here and there but nothing too distracting. I was wondering what was going on with Bert and quickly thought he must be dead. What I liked the most, however, wasn't so much the story's plot, but the emotions that were conveyed and the way they brought Bert 'to life' as a character.
Well done!
I'm flattered to hear praise from a writer like you. It makes me happier and sorry for the errors because I haven't studying writing and I learned it from reading and writing. Also, english is not my native language so a lot of errors for sure. Anyway, thanks again
No worries, errors are a common thing when one starts out in a non-native language. I've been there, too. The best to get rid of them is to keep writing more, that's what helped me the most. Otherwise free services such as 'Grammarly' are a great help for learning, too!