@agmoore That's amazing! The starting lines as you said is kind of an experience for me! I would love to give it a try and see how far I reach. Thank you for the new idea! I have a faint idea in my mind but it would be a little longer story. With your permission, please!
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Hello @rayt2, I'm so glad you like my story. Starting lines are important. You're right they are an exercise. If anything I wrote here gives you and idea, use it. It would really make me happy to see the story lead to more stories, more ideas. This is one of the reasons I wrote. Some of our writers this week seemed to forget the target exercise, creating a hook. This story might be a reminder.
That first line really isn't smashing, but it serves.
Thank you so much for reading and commenting. I look forward to reading your story.
Peace, and health :)