The mystery flows through this story from the beginning, I was left wondering what the cake really contained. I demand a continuation, please.
You knew how to compose a story full of magic and mysterious, most of all mysterious. From the beginning to the end. The reader ends up thinking that the girl failed in her plan, but then it turns out that it wasn't so. Splendid.
I have a growing list of things I must continue, I'll add this tale to it:)
And thank you so much for the kind words, I love to write and tell stories, and it's reader reactions like yours that help to keep me going and inspired!