Crime stories are challenging because they are almost like an investigation and all the loose ends must be tied up to make the story believable. I should say that this story is very well developed and with a twist that I did not expect, and I really liked the narration, it makes the reader feel part of the story. Very enjoyable and satisfying read. Excellent work!
Thanks for sharing your story with us.
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Thanks so much! I'm glad it worked for you and I appreciate that you chose to read it. It was an interesting piece for me to write - way outside my comfort zone... but... perseverance, right?