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RE: Joyous in the present time.

in The Ink Well2 months ago

Your storytelling really paints a vivid picture. I could almost see the sunny day, the volleyball game, and feel the calmness of that moment. The flow between past struggles and present joy was seamless and engaging.

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Thanks for reading through my story and the view illustrated using imagery analysis .