I loved the description. I had a feeling she got the wrong item, seeing that she did not care to look inside the paper. She only used the metallic texture she felt to determine she got the right item. I am pretty sure the other party confirmed their money, but she did not confirm her goods. Unless I read this all wrong. Great plot, ma'am.
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Hi, thanks for stopping by. Yes, that's right, she got the wrong item. Do you know what it should have been? Have you ever tried to acquire one? The question I never asked myself was why the hell did she want to get one? 😅
You know I thought the story was going to answer all of those questions.
Judging from the metallic description you gave, I tried to guess it must have been Gold.
Of course, at that point, I paused and tried to think if I knew how to get one if I wanted to. I was curious but I soon knocked myself out of my imagination to finish the story
Also, I was waiting, hoping, maybe the conversation with her friend would reveal why she had to get it, lol.
I didn't get to find out as it is.
Seeing that you are planning to write a second part I am hoping all our questions will be answered 😊
A gun, dear. Have you ever tried to carry an illegal weapon with you and had a patrol car pull up next to you, how would you feel? Gold wouldn't make you feel the same towards the authorities, well, unless you live in Caracas, hahaha. 😅 (You don't buy gold from a thug, you buy guns or drugs)
And it happened to me, I wasn't carrying it, a friend was carrying it, but I was still with him. One of the biggest frights I've ever had in my life.
Anyway, I am very grateful that you stopped to read my story. Thank you very much 😄🙏