Ummm my bad. I need to be more clear next time then.
I was aligning my lines thinking the last 4th and 3rd paragraphs voiced out the problem that she was going through, it was the societal pressure that she could not fight anymore. The strength that she once had, she couldn't hold on to it due to societal pressure.
It was not obvious I guess then. I need to work on my expression and read more short stories. Thank you for your advice. I will follow through. I'll try to interact more, thank you for your support.