Great story! It held me attention right to the very satisfying end. I loved some of your turns of phrase I.e. "Robert gave me a look of misery". Wonderful writing, looks forward to reading more!
Great story! It held me attention right to the very satisfying end. I loved some of your turns of phrase I.e. "Robert gave me a look of misery". Wonderful writing, looks forward to reading more!
Thank you so much for your kind words!