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RE: Lonely Diner / Un restaurant solitario. The Ink Well Fiction Prompt #10

in The Ink Well3 years ago

That end was abrupt man!

I wanted more... like what killed the fugitive? Will it also kill the agent, because he also sipped from the drink?

Anyways, nice use of the prompt. It was pacy, descriptive (maybe a little much), but it leaves one on a cliff-hanger, and I love cliff-hangers!

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Hello, @seesladen. I am grateful for reading my post. The agent sipped his tea peacefully to show the fugitive that there was no hurry even though the other two had arrived to pick him up.