This is like a story of meditation, of cleansing... Of freeing the burdens that the mind can carry. At first, I had a genie sort of feel to it, but then it quickly changed to that of mental Yoga...
Again, practice makes perfect, and with time I think you would get the full hang of writing in English. Otherwise, great soothing story!
Cheers!
Thank you, I want to be good at this so I will be writing until I can do better.
Yes, it's about someone who is chained with so much dreams.