It was a really sad take for Imani at the beginning. I can't believe she didn't get the chance to see her mother for five years and her kidnapper only brought her a little mattress six months before?
How horrible those five years must have been. I'm glad it worked out in the end and she has a chance to be with her mother again.
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This story is every parent's nightmare. To lose their child to an abduction. In this story you seek to assure us that the accused believes himself to be her father, although we are not left completely convinced, and he keeps her captive as his only means to ensure that he can see her. It seems a rather drastic and cruel measure to take, but you stop short of showing any abuse and so remain within Ink Well limits.
After she had a cup of water, she crawled to her little mattress on the floor. Six months ago, he had given it to her for her birthday.
This sentence really got me... it hits home! Regardless of who he is, it is clear that he possesses a twisted sense of reality and gains pleasure in the exercise of control and emotional manipulation in Imani's life.
I loved that first exclamation with the Silence. It really kept me reading and brought me to that new world that you describe. The thing that I liked the most was the punctuation signs on your writing. Good job!
It was a really sad take for Imani at the beginning. I can't believe she didn't get the chance to see her mother for five years and her kidnapper only brought her a little mattress six months before?
How horrible those five years must have been. I'm glad it worked out in the end and she has a chance to be with her mother again.
hello @seunruth for your image sourcing you are unfortunately using the incorrect link. Please navigate to Pixabay and select the correct URL for the page upon which the image actually sits. This link takes us to a Google search page where the image is not easily located.
We also remind you to engage with other members of the community by commenting on their posts; at least two comments for every story submitted to The Ink Well.
Finally, before we can curate this piece, we would like to ask you to verify that it is 100% your own work, as it has been flagged on one of our checks. You can find a list of our rules here.
Thank you for fixing the image sourcing issues and for engaging with members of the community on their posts.
This story is every parent's nightmare. To lose their child to an abduction. In this story you seek to assure us that the accused believes himself to be her father, although we are not left completely convinced, and he keeps her captive as his only means to ensure that he can see her. It seems a rather drastic and cruel measure to take, but you stop short of showing any abuse and so remain within Ink Well limits.
This sentence really got me... it hits home! Regardless of who he is, it is clear that he possesses a twisted sense of reality and gains pleasure in the exercise of control and emotional manipulation in Imani's life.
Thank you for sharing your story in the Ink Well.
I loved that first exclamation with the Silence. It really kept me reading and brought me to that new world that you describe. The thing that I liked the most was the punctuation signs on your writing. Good job!
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