RE: O HELPLESS MOTHER!(In memory of a mother and child in a fire outbreak)

[shanibeer]

This is a very powerful piece.
You have created a feeling of great sadness and loss.
There is some very good imagery: "For I feel this scorch around me." and "Some strange smell tense my nostrils"
I like the way you have written with the child's voice.

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[felix8]

Thanks really appreciate ☺☺