That must have been very difficult for him
But it ended well - when it comes to hearts and morals
She owned up to it
And there is probably. hope for a relationship as he supports her through her time in jail and after :D
You approach a problem of conscience from an original perspective, @sonofremi, Colors as an expression of mood and character--that's a creative device.
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You used colors to interpret them from the soul of the characters. Joseph gradually discovered the meaning of each color. In the end, the conscience of the protagonists triumphed. A lesson in plot. Well done.
This story really captured my attention, @sonofremi. I found it so intriguing when Joseph suddenly began to see colors, and then he learned how to interpret their meaning. The story is well-told and the characters and situation are really interesting. His dilemma about turning in his girlfriend is a really good story conflict, which is resolved with his decision to do the right thing in the end. Well done.
That must have been very difficult for him
But it ended well - when it comes to hearts and morals
She owned up to it
And there is probably. hope for a relationship as he supports her through her time in jail and after :D
Enjoyed the read
You approach a problem of conscience from an original perspective, @sonofremi, Colors as an expression of mood and character--that's a creative device.
Thank you for posting this story in the Ink Well community. We appreciate that you engage with other authors.
A very original story, from the narrator's point of view it is, unique and interesting.
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What an emotional story. You're very creative. It must have hurt Joseph so much to turn Samantha in.
Quite a sad story, but we must learn from it ...
You did something different @sonofremi .
You used colors to interpret them from the soul of the characters. Joseph gradually discovered the meaning of each color. In the end, the conscience of the protagonists triumphed. A lesson in plot. Well done.
This story really captured my attention, @sonofremi. I found it so intriguing when Joseph suddenly began to see colors, and then he learned how to interpret their meaning. The story is well-told and the characters and situation are really interesting. His dilemma about turning in his girlfriend is a really good story conflict, which is resolved with his decision to do the right thing in the end. Well done.
Bro I get the story is maddd and all, but if you keep giving responses like this there's a possibility spamminator might start downvoting you.
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