thanks for a really sweet story - you portray the priority change of a new father nicely.
would you mind if I suggested one of the writing tips for you to consider? It's this one
for me, working on this aspect of story telling, has made for more immersive reading.
Thanks so much for reading, I appreciate the link shared and I have looked into it and digested it, I will put in more effort in my next post... Thank ya🤗🤗