I did not see the ending coming, so nice work.
If you dont mind I'd like to suggest you look at The Ink Well's article on Show, Don't Tell, as IMO, looking to incorporate this will lift an already engaging narrative.
I did not see the ending coming, so nice work.
If you dont mind I'd like to suggest you look at The Ink Well's article on Show, Don't Tell, as IMO, looking to incorporate this will lift an already engaging narrative.