Hi @allentaylor. It's cute that you chose The Ink Well for your game. And the story is entertaining. However, we have a very specific mission here in our community, and ask that people only post short stories here. So please be sure to follow this guideline in the future, posting only a complete short story — with a resolution and an ending. See rule #1 of our community guidelines at the top of The Ink Well community home page.
We also expect engagement in the community, and ask everyone who posts in The Ink Well to read and comment on at least two other writers' stories for each one submitted.
Thanks for the comment. Are you saying you don't want me to include any other content with the short story? The story actually does meet your guidelines. I just thought I'd include the game as an add-on. If you don't want me doing that, that's fine. Feel free to clarify.
I will comment on others' content. I've been working on some other things that last couple of days. But thanks for the reminder. :-)