What a fascinating and well-written story, @amaponian! Your writing captures the reader from the first line. It is impossible to leave the reading without knowing if the protagonist will be able to buy happiness. The resolution of the conflict is very creative. Thank you for posting this story on @theinkwell.
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Thank you, sir.