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RE: Flying Inside the Cave

in The Ink Well3 years ago

Dreadful, dangerous and ugly - that’s the vivid image you draw of the menacing fly :

The roaring drone that precedes the arrival of the insectoid beast drums in our ears, a cacophonous, raw hum that makes our teeth chatter. A bloated black fly emerges from the deep underground chasm. It's a massive and terrifying beast, bigger than a pony, with multifaceted eyes that find you in the shadows. Gargantuan proboscis probes hungrily forward, while barbed legs hang down from its bulbous form. With a quiver of its pellucid wings, it dashes toward us.

Truly imaginative and terrifying. Your writing paints masterful portraits. Nice!

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Thank you very much for your valuable comment and for giving us this opportunity, thanks to your prompts, we have the opportunity to imagine and write these and similar things. I think my descriptions have improved over time, a writer should always read to improve themselves. 🤗🤗