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RE: A Push To Success

in The Ink Well2 months ago

The reader is impressed with your calm demeanor at the end. The professor it seems should had suffered a consequence, not you. And yet, you turned this challenge into a character-building experience. We can imagine the satisfaction you felt at surprising the professor with your success.

This piece would have benefited from greater development. Try to see where you might have filled it in a bit. Generally, we like to curate pieces that are a little more substantial. However, this was an enjoyable read. Thank you for sharing it with us, @beeeee.

Also we require our writers to offer feedback on the stories of at least two other authors in the community. We ask that they do this for every piece submitted. We will be looking forward to reading your comments.