You manage to make health into an exciting story, with a moral! Quite a display of storytelling skills. Our irritation with this grows as his frugality becomes more evident. He certainly does like money, it seems above all else--except his wife. This is his redeeming trait. He values something above money.
In the end, readers are relieved that the character does not succumb to his foolishness. Sleeping on the couch is a small price to pay.
Thank you for posting this entertaining story in the Ink Well community.
Thank you, i was hoping to pass across a message. I'm glad i was able to do just that.
Thank you once again, i'm glad i posted here.