Police Inspector Doris, what a strong character. She comes to life on the page, as does the whole frantic scene. You build suspense skillfully and save the day just at the last moment. Readers hold their breath along with Doris.
A very good detective/suspense story. Thank you for posting it in the Ink Well community. Although you are very responsible about visiting other writers, we yet remind everyone to comment and support on the work of others in the community.
Thank you very much for your kind words.
I will do my best to keep supporting writers.