This story is told in such a way that it draws the reader's attention. We feel the tension of the narrator and the concern for his friend, but at the end the whole reading is left in suspense because the story does not close with a denouement that allows the reader to find out everything that happened. Every story must have a beginning, a development and a denouement to be complete. We look forward to your participation in other stories.
Thanks so much.
I guess I will find a way to connect my next fiction story with this one to have landing conclusion.
Thanks so much @inkwell for checking up on my post. I really appreciate.