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RE: COMEUPPANCE.

in The Ink Well2 months ago (edited)

Hello @chm-writes,

You have submitted this as creative nonfiction, but it reads like a story. Did this happen to you, or someone you know? Or is it fiction, made up? Please clarify before we curate. Thank you.

We appreciate the clarification. It is nonfiction.

You introduce us to a personality that has experienced a moment of weakness. In that moment she violated her vows of marriage. Then she felt obliged to tell her husband. This is surprising, given how often he violated his vows. She seems to be an honorable person. It perhaps is a stroke of luck that she did weaken, because it gave her the opportunity to see how disloyal her husband could be.

The piece ends well, because the woman is emboldened to take a strong position and protect herself. We hope that this worked out well for her in the long run.

Thank you for sharing this with us, @chm-writes.

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I just made amendments, I got carried by the story, it's nonfiction and it happened to my neighbor. Thank you for pointing it out.