This is a really nice story, @coolo8. It was easy to follow the narrative and understand the action. Your story follows the pattern of many foundation myths, that is, stories that explain the origin of nations. The physical feature that separated Woko from the community was actually a sign that he was marked for greatness.
Thank you for sharing this story with the Ink Well community. We appreciate community members like you, who support other authors with their comments. Thank you!
He truly became great and made his people proud.