She opened her eyes and discovered it was all a dream.
We don't encourage stories that are all a dream. The reader is hooked. Follows the author to the end, and then is cheated of a true end. Please read our blog on this topic https://peakd.com/hive-170798/@theinkwell/writing-tip-35-dont-use-the-it-was-just-a-dream-escape-hatch
The story is well written. Please read our rules and tips. These will help you not only to succeed in the Inkwell, but generally when you write.
Thank you.