Hello @delightedpen,
Thank you for sharing this story with us. We were interested in Jose's dilemma. However, in the end, we learn little about his bride's mystery.
Please read Step#5 in @jayna's post on story arcs. This deals with resolution. Your story ends without giving the reader information about the bride's 'secret'. She lost her womb. Why? What happened? You state that forever ended. Does that mean the marriage is off?
Readers have persevered with you through the story. Unanswered questions are frustrating. It is a good idea to complete a story so that readers are not left wondering about the end. This is a suggestion for your writing in the future.
Firstly, thank you so much for the curation. Secondly, I've read through the feedback and I'll do my part to ensure I complete my stories next time. My readers won't have to go through the stress I put them this time.
For the couple, the wedding was called off, though I did not state it, but hearing the revelation from Ann, only one thing could ring in Jose's mind. And Ann's lost womb was a result of her previous relationship.