This story has an interesting pace. It shows us the conflict between Agnes and Sarah, plus a possible conflict between Agnes' expectations and a possible scam. Agnes trusts her benefactor but as readers we do not have the clarity to take sides between the truth stated by Srah and what the benefactor says.... We hope Agnes can make progress and also keep her friend.
Thanks for keeping in communication with the other writers, @deraaa .
Thank you so much for your feedback. I'll work on clarity in the next prompt. I appreciate it. ❤️