This is a beautifully expressive tale which uses action and dialog to advance the plot in a stunning way. It is additionally refreshing to see a relationship between a man and woman that is close in nature, yet not romantic. A unique take on what starts off feeling as if it will be some sort of love story. Although it would have been nice to see more development of Mateo's character, overall, this is a very well-balanced tale.
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Oh thank you!! I would make sure to always provide a good link. Thank you so much for the correction. And I thank you for your constant support