Good, attention grabbing, title. Well written. Very nice use of both the prompt and the skill.
You’ve taken a very ordinary train ride and turned it into a suspenseful event for the protagonist. Very cleverly done. The tale is full of tongue-in-cheek humor and we find ourselves giggling out loud as the young boy squares up to the tiny eye-rolling lizard. A very entertaining read.
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Thank you so much for reading it. I'm glad you enjoyed it☺️