What a clever and imaginative story, @elentiyaroberts. It was a joy to read.
One tip for you: Did you know you can improve the grammatical issues in your posts by first drafting them in Google Docs? It will point out many grammar and punctuation issues, and then you can click on them to accept the suggested fix. Then you can copy and paste the content into your post. You can read about it in our article, Help for the Grammatically Challenged, in our catalog of fiction writing tips.
Thank you for sharing your story in The Ink Well, and for reading and commenting on the work of other community members!
Wow, thank you so much for this tip, I’ll definitely implement it in my next writing.