With Tom's phone call, many old and painful memories were dredged up for Annie. It is understandable that she would have preferred not to receive the call at all! However, it is nice that in the resolution we find that this tough time in her life is well over.
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Ok I'll try Google Docs next time. Thanks for reading my story.