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RE: My Mom’s Vision

in The Ink Welllast year

This story is interesting because it is fiction and yet reads as though it is true. That's great when a writer can imagine something so vividly that the story becomes real for the reader.

We are surprised that your mother is not more annoyed with your father. Yet, the vision she has is so powerful that it seems to have overpowered any irritation she might feel.

Thank you for sharing this story with us, @faitz007. We appreciate that you engage with others in the community.

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thank you for the appreciation, I learned how to create fictional stories that are made as if they were experiences