Hello @famous01,
You have written a story with a strong arc and you also use the prompt. However, an acid attack is quite violent and graphic. We do have rules about violence in the community. This story could be edited and then be acceptable. We would like to give you an opportunity to receive curation. In order to do that, the acid attack would have to be taken out. Perhaps Emmanual could lose his sight for another reason, one that is not the result of a violent attack.
We hope you will consider editing this story. Often, we mute stories with violent episodes such as this, but we will give you a chance to edit.
Good luck!