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RE: An Improvised Toast | Un Brindis Improvisado | The Ink Well Fiction Prompt

in The Ink Well6 months ago

You deal with the prompt well, @fragozar01.

Look out for gender pronoun issues in your translations. They could be caught and corrected if you edited. Also look out for redundancy and /or repeated phraseology in your opening paragraphs.

eg: "The great day had arrived, long longed for by the graceful brunette with jet-black hair. Excitement coursed through her and, inside her, a tingling sensation of triumph, tingled through her thoughts, though also with a hint of nervousness.

Thank you for writing in The Ink Well.