This is a fun story. Almost a textbook example of how to drive a narrative forward with dialogue. Thank you for posting the story in the Ink Well community. We appreciate that you engage with other writers.
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I'm pleased you liked my dialogues. Thank you for giving all kind of writers weekly opportunities to share their stories with the world.
And, I already commented a couple of stories:
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Magic Table on a Caribbean beach by @gracielaacevedo
Feast mode! by @beautifulwreck