This is a delightful, clever story, written with flare. Your voice in the piece strikes a perfect tone. It is sort of tongue-in-cheek, and yet you get us to care about poor Tyson Herrera. We feel at the end, his cosmetic embellishments (white teeth!) plus a more positive attitude may help to bring him the love match he seeks.
The scene in the church is precious. Kudos for originality.
Thank you for sharing this story with us, @gabmr.
It makes me happy you could enjoy reading it as much as I did writing it. Tyson found out love is not that cruel after all. There's always a light at end of the tunnel.
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