This is a super creepy horror story, and a very interesting read, @ginika. You did well with adding action, dialogue and narrative!
Going forward, please be sure to use a tool that helps with grammar, such as Google Docs or Grammarly. Please see our article, Help for the Grammatically Challenged in our catalog of fiction writing tips. When stories have a lot of errors, it makes them more difficult to read and impacts the quality.
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