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RE: The Ink Well Fiction Prompt #7: The Library/ The past of my playground

in The Ink Well3 years ago

Whether taken metaphorically or literally, books are portals, and libraries receptacles for books. Your fantastic journey is anchored in reality by a ribbon. Lest the reader wonder if this journey was one of imagination alone, the ribbon tells us it was more than that.

This is a vivid journey, a visual journey, a journey of scents and sounds, a veritable banquet of sensation. You seem to have lost yourself in the story as much as the narrator, and that seems to have been fun. When a writer has fun, readers can feel it and enjoy it.

Thank you for sharing this story with the Ink Well community.

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Thanks for the thoughtful reading and comment, @theinkwell .
The tape is the testimony of the fantastic real, which says that it is not just the product of a dream or a child's imagination alone.
When I started writing I didn't know where I was going, only that the voice would enter, through a book, another form of the world.

Fortunately he liked my exercise,thank you for the opportunity.