Greetings, @hazmat! Thank you for selecting our community to publish your story. Unfortunately we can't curate it as we are exclusively dedicated to short stories, we don't curate piecemeal submissions. A short story has a beginning or a development of events and an end. Please check our home page before posting again, there you will find our posting rules very well detailed.
We look forward to reading from you with a post that complies with our rules.
It's actually a two part short story, was looking forward to posting the other part tomorrow..