This story shows a daughter reconciling herself, and her staff, with details that give her father a more positive light. This is a nice tale, however with some proofreading and development it would really shine. For example, in your resolution we do not find an answer to the system of spying which has been in place. Detailing a resolution for this conflict would really make this story shine.
Additionally, we see you have left this under the prompt post for the prompt 'elephant', yet the connection was unclear. Thank you for sharing your story with us, and for your engagement with other members of the community.
Maybe it was...... Misunderstood