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RE: White Dove

in The Ink Well3 months ago

That is a great story, an affecting story. You build carefully to the ultimate resolution. Early on you explain that Nixon sees a white dove as a premonition of death, and sometimes sees a ghost after a death has occurred. Consequently, we are not shocked to see his father materialize on the bed.

You cover the emotional aspect of the story well. Nixon wants to be a journalist. His father wants him to be a doctor. As Nixon makes the choice to follow his heart, he is afraid to confront his father. But, it seems, his father's love is stronger than his desire to dominate. In the end, Nixon is spared regret because his mother tells him the father knew about his career choice.

This story is believable, and highly readable. Good job, @idlemind.

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As always, thank you for your kind words and appreciation 😊