Your story shares the complexity of relationships, and that it can get especially complicated when two people love the same person. But Felix acted with integrity and did not try to steal her away. Nice job with the character development. The two brothers have very distinct personalities.
We have some feedback for you. You can make your stories easier to read by adding spaces in between each paragraph. We also have some great resources for developing writers in our catalog of fiction writing tips.
You might benefit from the article called Help for the Grammatically Challenged, which provides important tips on how to use Google Docs to draft your stories. It will point out errors that need to be fixed, and you can fix them by clicking on them. You can then copy the content from Google Docs and paste it into your post on Hive. It's a great way to improve your story's quality. Good luck and keep writing.