Marcus seems to be caught between the past, the present and the future. Your story does a very nice job of capturing a state of heightened consciousness. This is an interesting device — an opportunity to juxtapose reality against imagination and even allow them to blend.
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read my post, it is a pleasure this time to have achieved the goal. I apologize for not responding sooner, and also for my lack of interaction in the community. Thank you for the suggestion and I will work on it. Best regards and have a great day.